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You look just like me by ~Mirh:iconMirh:

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I have songs written all over my teeth
he says, it's the maggots
maggots do the maggots' dance
dance dance
I'm so sleepy I could sleep until
you feel your legs again
You're going to jail and I'm going to heaven
but it's all just the same
they took my arms but I took their dreams
and now we're almost even, at least I still have my eyes
but I'll tell you the bad news
my eyesight is almost gone
the maggots took it to the gnomes
to the beauty queen of beautiful garden gnomes.


You're like the children I never wanted.
©2005-2009 ~Mirh
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Submitted: December 30, 2005
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And I know all you devils by your christian names
and I know all you bitches by your christian names
Hole: Turpentine
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~madalice:iconmadalice: Dec 31, 2005, 6:25:43 AM
Somehow I find your poetry very amusing. I kind of lost my sense of reality when I read this. I started to think of all the meanings and stuff and... I just. I fell in love with the words and the atmosphere. :)

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SNÜS
~Mirh:iconMirh: Dec 31, 2005, 6:46:13 AM
My, this is an honour to me. o_o And just when I thought no one really bothered to read this shit I keep coming up with. XD
I hope it's a good thing, the whole you-find-my-poemwannabes-amusing-stuff. XD;;

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Sydämet syödään teurastamolla.
~madalice:iconmadalice: Dec 31, 2005, 10:24:15 AM
Runous on aliarvostettua kaikkialla<3

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~hics:iconhics: Dec 31, 2005, 2:27:36 PM
Joku ihanin runo ikinä. O_O Aika tonttuisaa. Vähän niinko pakkofave. Juu ei kyllä mitään järkevää kommenttia löydy. Sanotaan vaikka, että se oli mykistävä.
~rellaster:iconrellaster: Jan 28, 2006, 1:13:24 AM
This is cool. So many sweet lines build together. The funny part about it is that ALL the lines sound great, very satire, oivaltavia and GOOD in my ear, which I have never accomplished with my own writings. This is deathsex. :heart:

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Keep the gun oiled and the temple clean.
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